100WC #24

Ones upon a time a bare the bare name was goldilocks ,goldilocks was waking in the woods when she came across a home of 13 people goldilocks when in the home and there was three plat of beef on the table and goldilocks ate a bit off each plate in till she found the perfect beef then goldilocks found the stalls she sat and sat in till she found the countable stall she found the pitches in the kitchen she looked and looked in till she found the the right pitcher then she looked out the door and there where all the people

2 thoughts on “100WC #24

  1. Hi Esther,
    I liked the idea of switching porridge for beef!
    I wonder if the people minded Goldilocks being there.
    Try to remember to use capital letters for names and end your sentences using full stops.
    Well done for entering this weeks 100 word challenge!
    Mrs Symonds (Team 100WC)
    Linton, Cambridge

  2. Esther,
    Lovely, But maybe look at your spelling. Ones is spelt Once, Bare is spelt bear in this case and make sure for Goldilocks you use capital letters. Ask for help from Sozoe.

    Madeleine

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